i‑Learner Education Centre

Student Work

Close encounter of the marine kind…

In my Saturday Love to Write class, we have been working on using dialogue and emotions to bring our stories to life. This is a great piece of work by student Hadrian which makes me feel that I am right there in the water facing the shark myself. I love how we can see how the narrator’s thoughts were completely clouded by fear. It is these details which really draw the reader in. Well done Hadrian, keep it up!