Close encounter of the marine kind…Tweet
In my Saturday Love to Write class, we have been working on using dialogue and emotions to bring our stories to life. This is a great piece of work by student Hadrian which makes me feel that I am right there in the water facing the shark myself. I love how we can see how the narrator’s thoughts were completely clouded by fear. It is these details which really draw the reader in. Well done Hadrian, keep it up!