i-Learner Education Centre

Student Work

Writing in Christmas Placement Class



This is a short story about a car accident caused by texting while driving. This student provided this exceptionally good piece of work with very detailed description in our Christmas Placement Class. Good literary techniques were applied to this short story and the detailed description was very impressive at this students’ age (She is a P6 student). She made use of actions and dialogues to illustrate the emotions and personality of the characters. With sufficient practice and guidance, I am sure she can be an excellent writer.